Fixing a Run-on sentence to Proper and Compound sentence

Here are a few tips for you to fix your run-on sentence to a proper sentence and compound sentence. Most of the time we are not allowed to use a run-on sentence in a paragraph or in a whole essay. This introduction have a long sentence and i can believe that you can do it better and make it short.

Here is a video of 2 ways to change a run-on sentence to a proper sentence or compound sentence :

Thanks for watching and I will be having vacation right now!!!! Yeah!

A few weeks ago we made a small post about curiosity and here it is! :

First of all i was curious about subscriber and views in youtube. Youtube is a website then can uploaded videos and people in the world can watched, subscribe our channels, comments and give a thumbs up for the videos. Most of the people that has a account their happy and excited if their videos has so many views. I'm curious about why do famous you-tubers has so many subscribers and they get paid and staff, How do they get money from making videos to youtube? I have a youtube account and sometimes i make a videos or a vlog/blog, and i want to improve my talking so people watch my videos more around the world but i don't really know how to get attention to many people around youtube. 

I hope that people watched my videos, comment it and contact together because its really fun meeting many kinds of people and having fun making videos.

I tried to find out and ask some of the youtubers how do i got more views and create more attention, they asked me to create a facebook page and tell my friends to watch and support my channel. Many of the youtubers had problems, they wish having many views and more subscriber but they finally made improve. I got no improve at all to create more attention so i think i need to be more diligent to send massage and my videos to other people that have youtube account, I think by doing that more youtubers can watch my videos and contact each other with me. I will tried to do something to it so i will not being curious everyday while opening youtube.

Ok, now lets see the corrections now and make it better :

This is the result of my post! It looks better! : 

First of all I was curious about subscribers and views in Youtube. Youtube is a website that can uploaded videos and people in the world can watch it. Subscribe our channels, comments and give a thumbs up for the videos. Most of the people that has an account. Their happy and excited if their videos have very many views. I'm curious about why do famous you-tubers has so many subscribers and they get paid from google ads and staff, How do they get money from making videos to youtube? I have an Youtube account and sometimes I make a videos or a vlog/blog, and I want to improve my talking and my short clips so people watch my videos more around the world but I don't really know how to get attention to many people around youtube. 

I hope that people watches my videos, comment it and contact together because its really fun meeting many kinds of people and having fun making videos. 

I tried to find out and asked some of the Youtubers how do I got more views and create more attention, they asked me to create a Facebook page and tell my friends to watch and support my channel. Many of the Youtubers had problems, they wish having many views and more subscriber but they finally made improve. I got no improve at all to create more attention so I think I need to send massage or send my videos to other people that have a Youtube account. I think by doing that, more Youtubers can watch my videos and contact each other. I will try to do something about it and not being curious everyday about my Youtube account.

Adverb Movie

I made this short movie for my ESL project and its pretty fun because we could record our voice in when the speech from the character is out but its boring when I'm making the speech for the animation to talk.

I am not really impressed with my result because I don't really like the website, its not really interesting and bad Animation inside it but its simple and can make small children understand easily.

This a movie that USA post in their Cinema, its about Adverb

Im just joking...

This is a short clip about Adverb that I made in a website... Heres the link = Dvolver