Fixing a Run-on sentence to Proper and Compound sentence

Here are a few tips for you to fix your run-on sentence to a proper sentence and compound sentence. Most of the time we are not allowed to use a run-on sentence in a paragraph or in a whole essay. This introduction have a long sentence and i can believe that you can do it better and make it short.

Here is a video of 2 ways to change a run-on sentence to a proper sentence or compound sentence :

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